Holy CRAP. You're joking when you say this is your first TM fic, right? Because your characterization is amazing and spot-on, and the flow is descriptive and mesmerizing. This is, quite honestly, the best one-shot I've seen in a long, long time. Phenomenal job. I certainly hope to see more of you in the fandom--and soon!

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