ext_28165 ([identity profile] kj-draft.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] origamiflowers 2006-10-07 08:21 pm (UTC)

Oh wow. This was completely fabulous. I love how each vignette feels different in style and equally real. I especially liked the description of how she felt outside of her body when she was kissing Chase, and how Wilson the seducer feels sort of calculated -- it's a great contrast to his supposed puppyishness. I liked each one very much.
Excellent character study!

Thanks for sharing! :)

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